Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（10分）

請以My school life為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My school life is very interesting. We begin our classes at 8 o'clock and we have seven classes every day. We have many subjects. They're math, Chinese, English, biology, P.E. and so on. After school, we often borrow books in our school library. We have outdoor activities on the playground like football, basketball and so on. Look! Some girls are singing happily under the tree, and some boys are playing football over there. I like my school life very much.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給話題作文，介紹我的學(xué)校生。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We begin our classes…, They're…, We have…以及I like…等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己對學(xué)校生活的喜愛。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了學(xué)校生活是有趣的，接下來介紹在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)的科目和所進(jìn)行的活動，最后表達(dá)自己喜歡學(xué)校生活。此處every day, after school, on the playground, under the tree, over there等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。