Question

假如你是林思，要去澳大利亞的Melbourne High留學，需要在當?shù)卣乙粋�寄宿家庭（host family).請按要求寫一封約100詞的電子郵件給寄宿家庭中介公司的經(jīng)理Mr. Porter.
內(nèi)容包括：（1）簡單介紹自己的個人情況，如語言，愛好等
（2）提出自己的對寄宿家庭的要求（如下表所示）

Family member	English speaker ,no smoker
Housing	Near the school,a bedroom with a bathroom
Others	Cooking by myself……

 
注意：郵件需涵蓋以上所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮；開頭和結尾已給出（不計入總詞匯）；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名等相關信息。
Dear Mr Porter,
My name is Li Si,__________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Lin Si

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Porter,
My name is Lin Si. I’m a sixteen-year-old boy from China. I’m going to study in Melbourne High.
I like making friends. English is my favorite subject but I’m weak in spoken English. That’s why I want to find a host family who are native English speakers. In this way, I will have more chances to practice English in daily life. I hope it’s a family without smokers. Moreover, it’s better if the family lives within a twenty-minute walk from my school and provides a bedroom with a bathroom. As for the meals, I’d like to cook by myself because I’m fond of cooking.
Look forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Lin Si

試題分析：這篇作文給我們設置的情景是以林思的身份寫一封電子郵件，因為你要去澳大利亞留學，要在當?shù)卣乙粋�寄宿家庭，給寄宿家庭的中介Porter現(xiàn)在寫一封電子郵件。在這篇作文中應該主要有兩個內(nèi)容，一是介紹一下自己的基本情況；二是介紹自己對寄宿家庭的要求，這一部分在表格中給我們列舉了出來。我們需要用正確的英語將這兩部分內(nèi)容表達出來。當然我們還可以對這兩部分內(nèi)容進行補充，使文章的內(nèi)容更具體，更豐富。這篇文章我們應主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱來敘述。注意語句之間的連接，多使用好的句型和短語，以使表達流暢。
【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。短文的作者按照題目的要求寫了一封完整的電子郵件，內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢。首先作者先介紹了自己的一些情況，如I’m a sixteen-year-old boy from China、I like making friends. English is my favorite subject but I’m weak in spoken English等；然后作者提出了對寄宿家庭的要求，如I want to find a host family who are native English speakers、Moreover, it’s better if the family lives within a twenty-minute walk from my school and provides a bedroom with a bathroom等。短文中使用了比較多的短語和句式，如That’s why I want to find a host family who are native English speakers.中，表語從句和定語從句的使用；in this way, I will have more chances to practice English in daily life中，句型have chance to do sth.；短語moreover、as for等。