Question

【題目】 Writing（作文）

You are graduating from middle school soon. Your parents will give you a gift to celebrate the important time. Write a letter with at least 60 words to your mum and dad. Tell what you want and how useful and important it is to you. The beginning part of the letter is given.

你即將初中剛畢業(yè)，父母準(zhǔn)備一份禮物給你慶祝這一重要時(shí)刻。寫一篇至少60詞的信給你的父母。告訴他們你想要什么禮物，它對(duì)你的重要性及用處。信的開頭已給。

（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）

Answer 1

【答案】Dear parents,

I am graduating from middle school soon.You want to give me a gift to celebrate the important time.I hope that you will give me a computer as a gift.If I get it,my daily life will really change.For one thing,I can use the learning software to study.It will help me improve my grades.For another thing,I will send emails to my friends.So it is easy for me to communicate with my friends.Besides,I will collect things about learning and search for information on the computer.It will help me to gain knowledge.What is more,I can play computer games and chat with e-pals in my spare time. How interesting it is!

Yours,

xxx

【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文。在初中即將畢業(yè)之際，父母準(zhǔn)備送一份禮物給你慶祝這一重要時(shí)刻。要求寫一封信告訴父母你想要什么禮物，它對(duì)你的重要性及用處。根據(jù)所給的材料內(nèi)容可知該文時(shí)態(tài)主要以一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱主要用第一人稱書寫。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性；同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。為了使文章更通順完整，需要用上適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，確保正確率；另外，可以用上一些句型、短語(yǔ)，較高級(jí)的語(yǔ)言，這樣會(huì)使文章更出色。