Question

談?wù)撃阕钕矚g的一本書(shū)、一部電影、卡通故事、一項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)、一張照片、一個(gè)人（朋友、 家人、同學(xué)）、一個(gè)節(jié)日、一個(gè)季節(jié)、一次記憶深刻的旅行。
具體要求：
1. 任選一個(gè)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。
如選前三項(xiàng)內(nèi)容之一，內(nèi)容可包括介紹作品名稱、作者、以及喜歡的原因。
注意選用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。
盡量使用由and , but , so, so that , because , if ，though、although等連詞連接的并列句或復(fù)合句，豐富你的表達(dá)。
字?jǐn)?shù)在100詞左右。
提示詞：cartoon film / story , festival , Spring Festival , Christmas Day, an unforgettable journey(一次記憶深刻的旅行)  .   
My favorite ___________

Answer 1

My favorite teacher
My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36- year-old woman. But she is tall and has long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.  

試題分析：試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫(xiě)一篇介紹自己老師的短文。本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，注意從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，需要注意人稱和謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的搭配問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用的句式短語(yǔ)較為簡(jiǎn)單.如:she is……等。但是通過(guò)一些連詞，如：but 但是；and和，并且,because 因?yàn)榈鹊氖褂�，使得文章避免單純的重�?fù)，使得短文既通俗易懂又邏輯清楚。讓我們對(duì)我的朋友這個(gè)人有了一個(gè)比較全面的了解，不失為一篇上等作文。