Question

【題目】中學(xué)生普遍面臨著很多煩惱，請用英語描述下面表格中列出的問題，并提出自己的建議。

煩惱1整天有做不完的作業(yè)，經(jīng)常熬夜學(xué)習(xí)，無暇顧及個人愛好；

煩惱2父母太忙，沒有時間陪自己；

煩惱3幾乎沒有親密的朋友可以交流，經(jīng)常感到孤獨；

煩惱4對自己的體重不滿意，不知如何改變；

建議 … …

要求：1、條理清楚，語句通順；

2、80詞左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Now, many middle school students face some problems.

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Answer 1

【答案】Now, many middle school students face some problems.

Many students have too much homework to do. To finish it, they have to stay up late. So they often feel tired and have no spare time for their hobbies. Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them and they don’t have any close friends to talk to. I think they can talk to their parents and teachers about their problems and ask them for help.

Some other students aren’t happy with their weight. To lose weight and keep fit, they need to do more exercise and eat healthy food.

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