Question

【題目】書面表達。

學會自我保護是青少年需要具備的一種意識和能力。請根據(jù)所給的提示，并結(jié)合自己的觀點，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，談?wù)勗谏�活中青少年�?yīng)該怎樣自我保護(self-protection)。

提示：1、不要獨自去河邊游泳。

2、交友要慎重。

3、遇到危險時要報警。

4、要吃健康的食品。

5、上下樓梯時不要擁擠。

6、不要抽煙。

參考詞匯：alone, be careful to, call the police, go upstairs and downstairs

Answer 1

【答案】

How Can We Protect Ourselves

Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.

First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.

In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.

【解析】

試題分析：學會自我保護是青少年需要具備的一種意識和能力。就學校安全教育周收集的自我保護小貼士，寫一篇關(guān)于自我保護的作文。在寫作時要表達清楚，信息完整，語言通順，語意連貫。充分利用好提示語言，使作文結(jié)構(gòu)完整。

寫作亮點：這是一篇很貼近學生生活的作文，對于安全問題，不容忽視。作者圍繞所給提示語展開了寫作，比較成功。文中還用到了不少短語，make friends，in danger，call…for…，in time，so that，ought to，go upstairs or downstairs，stay away from等，為作文增添了色彩。