Question

【題目】研究表明音樂(lè)對(duì)人們的情緒有著重要的影響，因此人們用不同的音樂(lè)來(lái)調(diào)節(jié)心情。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。

聽(tīng)前的情緒狀態(tài)	適用音樂(lè)	聽(tīng)后的心境
壓力大，過(guò)分焦慮	流行音樂(lè)	放松
沉迷電腦游戲，興奮過(guò)度	鄉(xiāng)村音樂(lè)	平靜
困倦、疲勞	搖滾音樂(lè)	振奮
孤獨(dú)、悲傷	（自擬內(nèi)容）	（自擬內(nèi)容）

參考詞匯：鄉(xiāng)村音樂(lè)：country music搖滾音樂(lè)：rock music古典音樂(lè)：classical music

爵士樂(lè)：jazz music 民間： folk music 交響樂(lè)：symphonic music

Recently, a new research shows that different kinds of music can influence different moods. Now would you please talk about the function of music.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So we can change our moods by listening to different kinds of music. If you have too much pressure, you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed. People who enjoy playing computer games are too excited so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. And if you feel tired and sleepy, you can listen to the rock music so that you will feel excited again. When I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to soft music which always cheers me up. It makes me happy again.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。主要寫音樂(lè)對(duì)人們的情緒有著重要的影響，因此人們用不同的音樂(lè)來(lái)調(diào)節(jié)心情，動(dòng)筆之前應(yīng)首先考慮運(yùn)用那些句式表達(dá)短文提到的5種情況，一定要避免句式重復(fù)。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如 has an important effect on，listening to ，different kinds of，cheer me up，so that；運(yùn)用不同的句式使文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。如賓語(yǔ)從句that music has an important effect on one’s moods；定語(yǔ)從句who enjoy playing computer games，which always cheers me up；條件狀語(yǔ)從句If you have too much pressure, if you feel tired and sleepy；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句When I feel lonely and sad；目的狀語(yǔ)從句so that you will feel excited again；結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. 整篇文章顯示了作者具有較高的英語(yǔ)水平，達(dá)到了學(xué)以致用的程度,值得我們學(xué)習(xí)。