Question

13．時(shí)光荏苒，三年的初中生活即將過(guò)去．在這三年中，一定有某個(gè)你特別難忘的日子．請(qǐng)你以"What a/an             day!"為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述你印象深刻的一天．空白處可填入 happy，sad，relaxing 等詞．
要求：1．結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、內(nèi)容充實(shí)；
2．詞數(shù)80左右．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：But I think the Clean-up Day is the most unforgettable of all the things that have happened．但我認(rèn)為清潔日是所有發(fā)生的事情中最難忘的一天．本句是一個(gè)由think引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句；后面是一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是all the things，被all所修飾，故只能用that．
高分句型二：All of us felt very tired but we still felt very happy，because we all gave our own energy to make the school become better and better．我們都感到很累，但我們?nèi)匀桓械椒浅８吲d，因?yàn)槲覀兌几冻隽俗约旱木�力，使學(xué)校變得越來(lái)越好．這是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句； better and better越來(lái)越好．

解答 What a happy day!
       It's the last term for us to study in our school．Thinking back on the past three years，I have taken part in many activities with my classmates．But I think the Clean-up Day is the most unforgettable of all the things that have happened．（高分句型一）（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題）
　　On the afternoon of a sunny day，all of my classmates took the tools and went to the playground．Some of us swept the floor，some picked the litter up and the others watered the flowers．（具體的活動(dòng)）
　　At last，the whole school became brighter and cleaner．All of us felt very tired but we still felt very happy，because we all gave our own energy to make the school become better and better．（高分句型二）（活動(dòng)后的收獲和感想）

點(diǎn)評(píng) （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺(jué)得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語(yǔ)從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語(yǔ)，烘托謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．