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1．假如你叫Paul，是第一中學(xué)九年級(jí)學(xué)生，今年夏天即將畢業(yè)．初中三年你變化很大，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，記錄自己的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程，并談?wù)勀愕氖罴儆?jì)劃．

過(guò)去	1．性格內(nèi)向，不敢在人前講話． 2．對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)不感興趣，成績(jī)不好． 3．不愛(ài)運(yùn)動(dòng)，沉迷電腦游戲．
現(xiàn)在	1．樂(lè)于分享，與同學(xué)相處很好． 2．各科成績(jī)優(yōu)異，…（舉一例） 3．積極參加各類(lèi)活動(dòng)，…（舉一例）
暑假計(jì)劃	…（一至兩點(diǎn)）

要求：1）詞數(shù)100左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2）短文需包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3）字跡工整，條理清楚，行文連貫．
4）文中請(qǐng)勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校．
I'm Paul，a Grade 9student in No.1Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．
However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是記錄自己的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程，并談?wù)勀愕氖罴儆?jì)劃．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1過(guò)去1）．性格內(nèi)向，不敢在人前講話．2）．對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)不感興趣，成績(jī)不好．3）．不愛(ài)運(yùn)動(dòng)，沉迷電腦游戲．
2現(xiàn)在：1）．樂(lè)于分享，與同學(xué)相處很好．2）．各科成績(jī)優(yōu)異，…（舉一例）3）．積極參加各類(lèi)活動(dòng)，…（舉一例）
3暑假計(jì)劃
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be interested in 感興趣
be weak in 在…薄弱
what's more 再者
be crazy about  對(duì)…著迷
get along with  與…相處
take a part in 參加
【高分句型】
1．In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．
too+adj+to do sth 太…而不能．
2．I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．
so…that，如此…以至于，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．
3．I'll ①help my parents do some housework and do more reading ②to improve myself．
①help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
②動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．

解答 I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．
      In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型】（性格內(nèi)向，不敢在人前講話）I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects（對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)不感興趣，成績(jī)不好）．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．（不愛(ài)運(yùn)動(dòng)，沉迷電腦游戲）
     However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．（樂(lè)于分享，與同學(xué)相處很好）I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．【高分句型】（各科成績(jī)優(yōu)異）Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．（積極參加各類(lèi)活動(dòng)）Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．【高分句型】（暑假計(jì)劃）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書(shū)面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，寫(xiě)作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用，說(shuō)到過(guò)去用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，現(xiàn)在的狀況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，將來(lái)的計(jì)劃用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，不要混淆，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ)，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．