Question

假如你是Daniel，剛剛買了一張名叫“新中國60年”的教育光盤，根據(jù)下面所給信息，把它推薦給你的同學(xué)。要求包含所有要點，句子通順，適當(dāng)使用連接詞，不少于80詞。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Profile Name of game: New China’s 60 Years Number of levels: 6 Main character: Mr Chen Age: 70 years old Goal: Travel around China to know the great changes of China over the past 60 years. Love the country, love the hometown and make new China stronger and richer Area of study: Chinese history Setting: Different places around China Designer: Cao Jun Producer: Sunshine Educational CD-ROMs Co. Sold in: Xinhua Bookstores

  Hello, everyone! I would like to recommend you a new educational CD-ROM.______________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Hello, everyone! I would like to recommend you a new educational CD-ROM. Its name is “New China’s 60 Years”. It has six levels.The main character of the game is Mr Chen. He is seventy years old. The goal of the game is to travel around China to know the great changes of China over the past 60 years and let the young people love their country,love their hometown and use their skills and wisdom to make new China stronger and richer. The game is set in different places around China. It is designed by Cao Jun and produced by Sunshine Educational CD-ROM Co. You can buy the CDs in Xinhua Bookstore.

試題分析: 這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇關(guān)于一張教育光盤的說明文。本文材料是一篇說明書，在動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀這些內(nèi)容，爭取把主要內(nèi)容都表達(dá)出來。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意時間狀語與時態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題。注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
點評：注意寫作中的時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。