Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你是李明,本周日由你組織國(guó)際交換生去the Dream city 游玩。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)擬一份口頭通知.

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:

1.集合時(shí)間和地點(diǎn):上午九點(diǎn), theDreamcity入口處;

2.觀看楚劇,學(xué)習(xí)剪紙,制作陶土作品;

3.自由活動(dòng)一小時(shí), 可游玩、拍照等,五點(diǎn)乘地鐵返校;

4.天氣炎熱,著輕便裝;

5.請(qǐng)補(bǔ)充一-至兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人的想法或建議.

注意:

1.文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

2.詞數(shù): 60-80;

3.內(nèi)容連貫,不要逐條翻譯

4-開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯: entrance n.入口處 Chu Opera楚劇 clay piece陶土作品

Hello,everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Sunday

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Saturday. Here are our plans that everyone needs to know. First, we will meet at the entrance of the Dream City at 9:00 a.m. Then, we are going to appreciate Chu Opera, learn paper-cutting and make clay piece. After that, you will be free for your own activities, such as playing around and taking photos. Remember that you’re supposed to return to school at 5:00p.m. By the way, you’d better wear light clothes because of the hot weather. Hope you can enjoy yourselves.

【解析】

寫(xiě)作這篇作文需要寫(xiě)一份通知，要求是寫(xiě)出去游玩的集合時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)主要活動(dòng)：觀看楚劇,學(xué)習(xí)剪紙,制作陶土作品，自由活動(dòng)一小時(shí), 可游玩、拍照等,五點(diǎn)乘地鐵返校。還需要簡(jiǎn)單描寫(xiě)天氣，天氣炎熱，著輕便裝，為了使行文連貫需要增添適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：首先開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山要說(shuō)明這是一則通知，是人人需要了解的，寫(xiě)出了寫(xiě)作的目的（Here are our plans that everyone needs to know.），然后運(yùn)用了一些詞語(yǔ)使得文章邏輯性很強(qiáng)，如 First, then, after that。在描述活動(dòng)的時(shí)候短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，appreciate Chu Opera（欣賞楚�。�，learn paper-cutting（學(xué)習(xí)剪紙），make clay piece（制作陶土作品），be supposed to（應(yīng)該做…），By the way（順便說(shuō)一下）。句式的使用也有多樣性，例如用到了祈使句Remember that…，最后有簡(jiǎn)單的祝福語(yǔ)，使得這則通知更加完整，完成了題目要求的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。