Question

【題目】根據(jù)圖示，將它們編寫(xiě)成一個(gè)有趣的故事，并將您的推測(cè)寫(xiě)進(jìn)故事中，限定為100字左右。關(guān)鍵字：land, man, UFO, alien, chase, must,could/might,can’t

My neigbour, John lives alone. He had…

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

My neighbor, John lives alone. He had an unbelievable experience. Three days ago, a huge plate suddenly landed in front of his house. There might be someone visiting him. Then a short alien got out of the strange UFO and knocked at John’s window. He was too scared to move away. After a minute the door opened little by little. He saw an ugly alien walking up to him. It can’t be a human being. “Help! Help!” John cried loudly, running out of his house. Many neighbors were woken up by the scary noises. The alien noticed him at once. It was chasing after the poor man. At the moment, it thundered and lightened in the sky. Everything disappeared when John turned back. There could be something strange around us. Do you believe it or not?

【解析】

根據(jù)題目要求，可知本文屬于圖畫(huà)作文，首先需要理清幾幅圖畫(huà)之間的脈絡(luò)關(guān)系，找出有趣所在，主旨主題所在；文章主要講述了作者一個(gè)鄰居突遇飛碟和外星人的有趣故事。然后確定文章所使用的時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)；文章使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱(chēng)為主。接下來(lái)需要確定文章的脈絡(luò)，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，以及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)可能要用到的表達(dá)。然后圍繞要點(diǎn)著手進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。寫(xiě)作完成后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。