Question

20．某中學(xué)正在招聘赴英夏令營(yíng)領(lǐng)隊(duì)（tour leader），應(yīng)聘的條件是用英語(yǔ)給你的隊(duì)友寫一封email，提醒相關(guān)注意事項(xiàng)．假如你是王涵，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，寫一封email，參加應(yīng)聘．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．出行前（提高了解相關(guān)信息、英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)）；
2．旅行中（注意言談舉止、人身安全等）；
3．…
要求：
1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱．
Dear friends，
I'm glad to be your tour leader，and I'm writing to tell you something important．
Before we go to England，we should learn about something useful，such as the weather，the interesting places．We should practice our spoken English，too．
When we're travelling in England，we must remember what we can't do．For example，we can't talk loudly on the planes，trains or buses．If you aren't allowed，you can't leave our team．
Finally，don't forget we are one team，so we must help each other．
If you still have any questions，please write to me．
Hope to see you soon!
Yours，
Wang Han．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
When we're travelling in England，we must remember what we can't do．當(dāng)我們?cè)谟��?guó)旅行時(shí)，我們必須記住我們不能做的事．這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候．
高分句型二
If you still have any questions，please write to me．如果您還有任何問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)寫信給我．這是一個(gè)if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，如果…．

解答 Dear friends，
I'm glad to be your tour leader，and I'm writing to tell you something important．
Before we go to England，we should learn about something useful，such as the weather，the interesting places．We should practice our spoken English，too．【要點(diǎn)一，出行前（提高了解相關(guān)信息、英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)）】
When we're travelling in England，we must remember what we can't do【高分句型一，注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．For example，we can't talk loudly on the planes，trains or buses．If you aren't allowed，you can't leave our team．【要點(diǎn)二，旅行中（注意言談舉止、人身安全等）】
Finally，don't forget we are one team，so we must help each other．【要點(diǎn)三，要互相幫助】
If you still have any questions，please write to me．【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】
Hope to see you soon!
Yours，
Wang Han

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．