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8．中考后就會(huì)迎來(lái)漫長(zhǎng)的暑假了，班會(huì)課上老師組織大家討論暑假的學(xué)習(xí)和生活計(jì)劃．同學(xué)們提出到國(guó)外旅游，假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)向給同學(xué)們做個(gè)匯報(bào)．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

Tips for travelling abroad
前期準(zhǔn)備	根據(jù)天氣準(zhǔn)備衣物及必備證件；…（請(qǐng)自擬一點(diǎn)）
注意安全	交通安全，注意防盜，…（請(qǐng)自擬一點(diǎn)）
文明禮儀	公共場(chǎng)合不大聲喧嘩，不插隊(duì)，不隨手扔垃圾；…（請(qǐng)自擬一點(diǎn)）
你的建議	請(qǐng)自擬一點(diǎn)

要求：1．詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮；
3．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息．
參考詞匯：身份證 ID card； 舉止文明的 well-behaved
Tips for travelling abroad
Boys and girls!The summer holiday is coming．I think it's a good idea to travel abroad．How can we enjoy ourselves？Here are some tips．
Before you leave，you'd better learn about the weather and prepare enough clothes．Remember to take your ID card and passport．Make sure you take enough money．
During travelling，safety must come first．First of all，follow traffic rules all the time．Second，try to keep your things in good order and take good care of them．Third，it's better to take some medicine with you if necessary．
What's more，always try to be a well-behaved tourist．In public places，remember to keep your voice down．Don't push in before others and don't drop litter carelessly．Read public signs carefully before entering some tourist attractions．
In my opinion，it's useful to learn about the culture and customs of the country you will visit．Just as the saying goes，"when in Rome，do as the Romans do．"

I hope these tips may be helpful to you!
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)剣?guó)外旅游的前期準(zhǔn)備以及一些注意事項(xiàng)并給出自己的建議．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1前期準(zhǔn)備：根據(jù)天氣準(zhǔn)備衣物及必備證件；…（請(qǐng)自擬一點(diǎn)）
2注意安全：交通安全，注意防盜，…（請(qǐng)自擬一點(diǎn)）
3文明禮儀：公共場(chǎng)合不大聲喧嘩，不插隊(duì)，不隨手扔垃圾；…（請(qǐng)自擬一點(diǎn)）
4我的建議：請(qǐng)自擬一點(diǎn)
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
make sure 確信
all the time一直
remember to do sth 記得去做某事
take  care of 照顧
what's more再者
push in插隊(duì)
in one's opinion依某人看來(lái)
高分句型：
1．Third，①it's better to take some medicine with you②if necessary．
①it是形式主語(yǔ)，后面的動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．
②if necessary是一個(gè)省略句，完整表達(dá)是if it is necessary如果必要的話
2．①In my opinion，②it's useful to learn about the culture and customs of the country③you will visit．
①in one's opinion依某人看來(lái)
②it是形式主語(yǔ)，后面的動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．
③you will visit是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞country，關(guān)系詞which或that做定語(yǔ)從句的賓語(yǔ)，故省略．

解答 Tips for travelling abroad
Boys and girls!The summer holiday is coming．I think it's a good idea to travel abroad．How can we enjoy ourselves？Here are some tips．
Before you leave，you'd better learn about the weather and prepare enough clothes．Remember to take your ID card and passport．Make sure you take enough money．（前期準(zhǔn)備）
During travelling，safety must come first．First of all，follow traffic rules all the time．Second，try to keep your things in good order and take good care of them．Third，it's better to take some medicine with you if necessary．（高分句型）（注意安全）
What's more，always try to be a well-behaved tourist．In public places，remember to keep your voice down．Don't push in before others and don't drop litter carelessly．Read public signs carefully before entering some tourist attractions．（文明禮儀）
In my opinion，it's useful to learn about the culture and customs of the country you will visit．（高分句型）Just as the saying goes，"when in Rome，do as the Romans do．"（我的建議）
I hope these tips may be helpful to you!
That's all．Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭．我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．要注意主謂一致等問題．寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．