Question

【題目】 writing(作文)

Write at least 60 words on the topic "That day, I made a/an___________”(以“那天,我(做) 了一（個）_____________”為題,寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文,標(biāo)點符號不占格)

(注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息,否則不予評分。)

生活中的每一次體驗、每一段經(jīng)歷都為你的成長助力。你或許交了一個新朋友、許了一個新

愿望、作了一次新選擇······，請分享一段你的經(jīng)歷，并說明這段經(jīng)歷是如何幫助你成長的。

Answer 1

【答案】That day,I made a choice

Life is full of choices, and there was an important and memorable choice in my life.

When I graduated from my junior high school, I had to make a choice: to be a through-train student or be a senior high school. I was very aware of my strengths and weaknesses. I loved learning history/geography, even interested in politics. I didn't want to leave away from my favorite subjects because I always enjoyed them while I was studying. So through painful choices, I chose to be a senior high school student.

I never regretted the choice. I am proud of myself --a senior high school student who is enjoying the pleasure of others' learning. Learn to choose, to change your destiny, to change your life!

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹一段我的經(jīng)歷，并說明這段經(jīng)歷是如何幫助我成長的。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：There was …….，When I graduated from……，I was……，I loved……，I didn't want to……，I am proud of……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。