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你的朋友Peter看到了你國(guó)慶期間游覽天馬山時(shí)拍的相片，詢問(wèn)你游天馬山的經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，將游覽經(jīng)歷寫成一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要求語(yǔ)句通順，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能逐句翻譯。

1. 天馬山空氣清新，以其優(yōu)美的景色而著稱，如：瀑布、綠草、花朵……

2. 你和家人一個(gè)小時(shí)就爬上了山頂, 并在山頂玩游戲、唱歌、野餐；

3. 下午五點(diǎn)回到家，感覺(jué)累，但很開(kāi)心。

During National Holiday, my family and I went to Mount Tianma. __________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

During National Holiday, my family and I went to Mount Tianma. Mount Tianma is a famous place that has many beautiful views, such as waterfalls, green grass and nice flowers. And the air in Mount Tianma is quite clear.

It took us an hour to climb up to the top. What a beautiful view we saw at the top! We played games, sang songs and then had a picnic there.

We got home at about 5:00 pm. Although we felt tired, we had a great time. I hope I can go there again. 

【解析】這是一片給材料作文，根據(jù)提示將游覽經(jīng)歷寫成短文，作者運(yùn)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)敘述了天馬山的景點(diǎn)，以及再爬山的經(jīng)過(guò)，最后還說(shuō)明了自己的感受，語(yǔ)句通順，符合邏輯。