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【題目】根據(jù)下面的提示，以A famous British nurse為題介紹英國著名的護(hù)士——佛羅倫斯·南丁格爾。

1).佛羅倫斯·南丁格爾于1920年5月12日出生。
2).1851年，她被訓(xùn)練為護(hù)士。
3).三年后，她去了英國軍事醫(yī)院以便她能幫助英國士兵。在她到來之前，因?yàn)獒t(yī)院不衛(wèi)生，很多士兵在醫(yī)院里死去。南丁格爾努力工作使醫(yī)院清潔衛(wèi)生，讓士兵不再死去。
4).當(dāng)她1856年回到英格蘭時(shí)，她已是一位民族女英雄。
5).南丁格爾寫了兩本關(guān)于護(hù)理的書，她還創(chuàng)辦了一所學(xué)校培訓(xùn)護(hù)士。
6).1910年8月13日，她在倫敦逝世，享年90歲。

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【答案】A famous British nurse

Florence Nightingale was born on 12th May 1820. In 1851, she was trained as a nurse. Three years later, she went to a British military hospital so that she could help British soldiers. Before she arrived, many soldiers died in the hospital because it was dirty. Florence Nightingale worked hard to make the hospital clean and save soldiers' lives. When she returned to Britain in 1856, she became a national hero. Florence Nightingale wrote several books about nursing, and she also started a school to train nurses. She died in London on 13th August 1910, when she was ninety years old.

【解析】這是一篇命題作文，根據(jù)要求寫一篇介紹英國著名的護(hù)士——佛羅倫斯·南丁格爾的作文，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，時(shí)態(tài)的選擇上應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)為主，人稱采用第三人稱。結(jié)合所給要點(diǎn)盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞，注意上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意描述的全面性，不能漏掉寫作要點(diǎn)提示；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法結(jié)構(gòu)，句子應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。