Question

【題目】 你是李華，你的朋友Peter寫(xiě)信給你說(shuō)他在這個(gè)漫長(zhǎng)又特別的寒假里的一些煩惱。在學(xué)習(xí)方面：學(xué)習(xí)上遇到困難，網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)效率不佳，有時(shí)家庭作業(yè)不會(huì)做；在生活方面：和父母關(guān)系不好，自己有些傷心，父母在學(xué)業(yè)方面給了他很大的壓力，父母不太理解他，甚至有時(shí)總是和他發(fā)生爭(zhēng)吵。

Peter 希望你（李華）能給些合理的建議或提供幫助，以下是你的回信。（字?jǐn)?shù)要求80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)）

Dear Peter,

I know that your troubles were coming out one after another during such a long special winter vacation. A a teenager at the same age as you, I truly understand your feelings, so I’d like to give you some advice.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】例文：

Dear Peter,

I know that your troubles were coming out one after another during such a long special winter vacation. As a teenager at the same age as you, I truly understand your feelings, so I’d like to give you some advice．

In study, you should talk about the situation with your teacher first. Maybe they will leave less homework and help you improve learning efficiency. In addition, you can ask your classmates about their ways to learn and change you own way if necessary. And more importantly, I think you should go and apologize to your parents. Tell them your feelings and pressure. They must will forgive you and help you find the solutions. Listening to soft music and doing exercise are also good ways to make you relax.

I hope these suggestions can be of some help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.題干解讀：此為書(shū)信作文；要求有兩方面，分別是從學(xué)習(xí)和生活上給出建議；開(kāi)頭已給出，注意上下文的連貫；一般用含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞句型，時(shí)態(tài)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；在提建議的過(guò)程中注意連接詞的使用，合理安排行文。