Question

4．健康的興趣愛好不僅給我們帶來快樂，還能幫助我們增長見識，學習技能，甚至會成為我們未來的工作．請以"My hobby"為題，結合自己自身的經(jīng)歷寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文．
寫作要點：
1．What is your hobby？
2．Why do you have the hobby？/Why do you keep it as your hobby？
3．What have you learned from your hobby？
要求：
（1）文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名和學校名稱；
（2）詞數(shù)：80左右．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Though I'm not good at it，I often lose myself in it．雖然我不擅長，但是我經(jīng)常沉迷于此．
though引導的讓步狀語從句．不能與but連用．
【高分句型二】
When I am angry with something，it also can make me happy again．當我生氣的時候，能讓我再開心．
①when引導的時間狀語從句．
②make sb+adj讓某人怎樣．

解答 My hobby
Everyone has our own hobbies，it may give us a lot of happiness．Then what's my hobby？My hobby is listening to music．（我的愛好是什么）When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music．Though I'm not good at it，I often lose myself in it．（為什么有這個愛好）【高分句型一】When I am in trouble，music can make me calm down．When I am very tired，it can make me comfortable．When I am angry with something，it also can make me happy again．（愛好給我的幫助）【高分句型二】My parents think it's helpful for me．Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health．I can learn how to be happy in my life．（我能從中學到什么）
Do you like listening to music？If not，I hope you can have a try，you'll find it is so good．（給別人的建議）

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