Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

泰興公園最近有很多問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你寫一封80詞左右的信呼吁人們保護(hù)環(huán)境，遵守規(guī)則。要點(diǎn)如下，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。要點(diǎn)如下：

1．首先，不要亂扔垃圾，保持公園的清潔，不要摘公園里的花；

2．其次，在公園里大聲談笑是粗魯無(wú)禮的，請(qǐng)把聲音放低；

3．第三，如果有人擋住你的路，可以說(shuō)“勞駕”等他移動(dòng)；

4．還應(yīng)向人們解釋保護(hù)公園的重要性；

5．做這些對(duì)我們的環(huán)境以及健康都有好處。

Dear all,

The environment in Taixing Park has become worse recently. We must do something

to stop it．

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Yours sincerely

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear all,

The environment in Taixing Park has become worse recently. We must do something to stop it.

First, we shouldn't drop litter everywhere and always keep the park clean. We should never pick flowers in the park. Second, it's rude to talk or laugh loudly in the park. Please keep our voice down. Third, if someone is in your way, please say "Excuse me" and wait till he moves. We should also explain to others the importance of protecting the park. It's good for our environment as well as our health by doing this.

Yours sincerely,

Tom

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇書信，給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)展開寫作。根據(jù)所給材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、進(jìn)行敘述。注意時(shí)態(tài)、人稱，要將題目例舉的要點(diǎn)列舉出來(lái)，注意固定詞組搭配。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：it's rude to do sth；explain to do sth；as well as等使得文章句子的結(jié)構(gòu)不再單一，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)，增加了文章的色彩。