Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。（10分）

你最好的朋友是誰？他或她的年齡，身高、性格（他或她喜歡什么）你喜歡跟他在一起嗎？你們一般在一起玩什么？以“My best friend（我最好的朋友）”為題，寫一篇不少于70個(gè)單詞的短文。

My best friend

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Best Friend

Linda is my best friend.She is 15 years old.She is a pretty girl with a round face and two big black eyes.She always has a smile on her face.She is taller than I.

Every morning,we go to school together.She studies quite well and she's a top student in our class.She is modest in her behaviour.When I have difficulty in English,I always ask her for help.We are both interested in music.At weekends,we join the same hobby group and play the violin together.

We like each other.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，可按照時(shí)間順序來寫，注意要點(diǎn)的齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有許多實(shí)用的表達(dá)方式She is modest in her behaviour.When I have difficulty in English,I always ask her for help.We are both interested in music.At weekends,we join the same hobby group and play the violin together.等等。