Question

【題目】書面表達。

假如王益是你的好朋友，根據(jù)提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文介紹王益的業(yè)余愛好。（短文開頭已給出）

提示語：

1. 王益以前是個電影迷, 一周至少去看兩次電影，有時租VCD在家里看，最喜歡的影星是馮小剛；

2. 王益現(xiàn)在的興趣是集郵, 認為集郵非常有趣，可以從郵票上學到很多關于人物、地點、歷史的知識, 有些舊郵票非常有價值；

3. 上周五是王益的生日, 他從朋友那里得到了許多郵票，非常高興。

Answer 1

【答案】

Wang Yi is my good friend. He has a lot of hobbies. He used to be a movie fan and went to the movies at least twice a week. Even he sometimes rent VCD at home watching. His favorite movie star is Feng Xiaogang.

But now his hobby is collecting stamps. He thinks stamp collecting is interesting. He can learn a great deal of knowledge from stamps about people, places, history and some old stamps are very valuable;

Last Friday is Wang's birthday. He got many stamps from his friends so he felt very happy.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。主要介紹好朋友的愛好情況。根據(jù)提示，主要介紹過去的愛好及現(xiàn)在的愛好，可以用過去時態(tài)或者used to介紹過去的愛好，用一般現(xiàn)在時介紹現(xiàn)在的愛好。周五的生日情況用一般過去時態(tài)。在寫作中注意主語和謂語的一致性。

寫作亮點：這篇短文內容全面，王益過去的愛好，現(xiàn)在的愛好，周五過生日收到的禮物。一個but就從過去的愛好轉到了現(xiàn)在的愛好的介紹。語言連貫，層次分明。