Question

假如你叫大明，收到了你的英國朋友Tony的來信，信中他很關心四川雅安地震后學生的情況。請你根據他的來信內容寫一封回信，感謝他對災區(qū)學生的關心，回答他的問題，并談談你的感受。
提示詞語：thank you, care to， go on， government ，offer，encourage， brave　
Dear Daming,
I’m sorry to hear that a big earthquake happened in Ya’an, Sichuan. Some school buildings broke down in the earthquake and many students couldn’t go to school. But I know the government is trying their best to help them. And Chinese people are so strong and brave that they aren’t afraid of anything difficult. Can the students go on studying now? Please tell me more about them.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours, 
Tony
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you.                                         
                                                                                 
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                              
Best wishes.  
Yours
Daming

Answer 1

Dear Tony,
I’m very glad to hear from you.
Thank you so much for your care to the students in Ya’an, Sichuan. Yes, the students can go on studying now. It’s true that many students couldn’t go to school at that time. But as quickly as possible, the government helped them find new places to go on studying. And many people also offer them lots of help and encourage them to be strong and brave. I think they are not alone. China is a big family and love is just around them.
Best wishes.                                              
Yours
Daming

試題分析：本書面表達是一封回信，由于有來信，所以應該仔細閱讀來信中的內容，弄清對方問的問題是什么，在進行回答。首先應該表示感謝，然后主要應該介紹現(xiàn)在學生的學習和生活情況，以及對將來的設想。書寫時注意時態(tài)和人稱的運用。
點評：做英語書面表達時，只要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改