Question

10．最近你班上的同學都在為畢業(yè)后是否出國讀書展開了熱烈的討論，請根據(jù)以下要點提示談談出國讀書的優(yōu)點和缺點，并將你的選擇及理由告訴同學．

注意：1、詞數(shù)80左右（文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；
2、不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分．
These days，our classmates are having a hot discussion about studying abroad．               
This is my choice，will you agree with me？

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內容為根據(jù)圖表中所提示的內容要點用英語寫一篇關于"談談出國讀書的優(yōu)點和缺點"的短文．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱為第一人稱．
高分句型：
①if I go abroad，I will have to leave my family and be far away from my friends．如果我出國，我將不得不離開我的家人，遠離我的朋友．句子中if引導一個條件狀語從句，主句用一般將來時，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時，have to，不得不，后面跟動詞原形，be far away from 遠離．
②So in my opinion，it's better for me to go on studying in my own country，因此，在我看來，最好是我繼續(xù)在國內學習．in my opinion，在我看來；it's better for me to do sth做某事更好一些，it作形式主語，后面的to引導的不定式作真正的主語；go on studying 繼續(xù)學習，后面跟動詞的ing形式．

解答 These days，our class are having a hot discussion about studying abroad．As I know，it has both advantages and disadvantages．On one hand，students in foreign countries may have less homework，so they can have more free time．What's more，there are fewer people in these countries so the air will be cleaner and the environment will be better．（出國讀書的優(yōu)點）
However，studying abroad is really expensive．I must do some part-time to make money for my daily use．Besides，if I go abroad，I will have to leave my family and be far away from my friends（高分句型）．If so，can I study well and will I feel happy？（出國讀書的缺點）
My parents do not have much money and I don't want to stay too far away from them．So in my opinion，it's better for me to go on studying in my own country（高分句型）．This is my choice，will you agree with me？（我的選擇及理由）

點評 這是一篇圖表作文，所給材料比較詳細，且都用英語給出，故只需要將這些材料按照一定的邏輯順序組織成文即可．在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性．