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10．任務(wù)二  每年的8月8日是"全民健身日"．為了讓這個(gè)節(jié)日更加深入人心，某英文雜志的欄目正在以"Let's Do Exercise Together"為題，向廣大中學(xué)生征文．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇文章，向該欄目投稿．

運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性	運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)間與方式
◆保持健康 ◆培養(yǎng)個(gè)人的性格	◆上學(xué)時(shí)步行或騎自行車 ◆體育課進(jìn)行各種鍛煉（跑步、打籃球…） ◆周末與朋友去爬山、游泳等

參考詞匯：keep fit，train a person's character，ride，PE class，climb mountains
要求：
（1）詞數(shù)：80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（2）短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地點(diǎn)．
Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise．.Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character．What's more，doing exercise helps us to study better．
We can do exercise whenever we want．It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike．In PE classes，we can do all kinds of exercise，such as running，jumping，playing basketball and so on．On weekends，we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends．Also，we can go hiking during the vacations．
Let's do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"Let's Do Exercise Together"為題說說運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性和方式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性；保持健康，培養(yǎng)個(gè)人的性格
2．運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)間與方式；上學(xué)時(shí)步行或騎自行車，體育課進(jìn)行各種鍛煉（跑步、打籃球…），周末與朋友去爬山、游泳等

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
help sb （to） do sth 幫助某人做某事
what's more 再者
be good for 對(duì)…有益

【高分句型】
1．Doing exercise can①not only②help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character
①not only…but also…不僅…而且連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等成分
②help sb （to） do sth 幫助某人做某事
2①．What's more，②doing exercise helps us to study better．
①what's more 再者
②動(dòng)名詞做主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)helps．
3．We can do exercise whenever we want．
whenever引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．

解答 Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise．Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character【高分句型】．What's more，doing exercise helps us to study better．【高分句型】（運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性）
We can do exercise whenever we want．【高分句型】It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike．In PE classes，we can do all kinds of exercise，such as running，jumping，playing basketball and so on．On weekends，we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends．Also，we can go hiking during the vacations．（運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)間與方式）
Let's do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇材料作文，所給要點(diǎn)清晰，要求明確，話題內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，勾勒要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．行文中要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)以及主謂一致問題．同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
這篇短文能夠根據(jù)寫作提示，較好地把與寫作相關(guān)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行歸納整合，內(nèi)容覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，考生有較大的發(fā)揮空間；同時(shí)靈活使用復(fù)雜句式，使文章自然流暢．文章中還使用了一些常用的句式和短語，如It's+形容詞+for sb to do sth、not only---but also---、help sb to do sth、what's more、all kinds of、such as、and so on、healthy lifestyle等這為文章增色不少．在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中注意加強(qiáng)練筆，掌握一些常用句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．