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14．每個(gè)人都有自己的夢(mèng)想，努力堅(jiān)持終能實(shí)現(xiàn)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖及表格中所提供的信息寫一篇文章．（精校）

Tom	1．出身貧寒，付不起學(xué)費(fèi)，但一直自學(xué)，考取了大學(xué)． 2．上人學(xué)時(shí)堅(jiān)持打零工（part-time job）并照顧遭遇車禍的父母． 3．堅(jiān)持夢(mèng)想（follow one's dream），擁有了自己的農(nóng)場(chǎng)．
You	你的夢(mèng)想	…
	如何實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢(mèng)想	勤奮學(xué)習(xí)  …

要求：
（1）所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
（2）介紹Tom，談?wù)勀愕膲?mèng)想并自擬兩點(diǎn)實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的途徑．
（3）文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（4）語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整．
（5）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名．
Everyone has his/her dream．The one who never gives up can achieve his/her goal．Tom is a very good example．Hewas born in a poor family．His parents didn't have enough money to pay for his study so that he couldn't go to school．He was very sad，but nothing could stop him from studying．He kept on learning by himself at home．At last，he got high grades and
entered his ideal college．Unfortunately，a terrible accident happened to his parents．During the time he was at college，he did part-time jobs for a living and took good care of his parents．Because he followed his dream all the time，he became the owner of a large farm successfully．
I have my own dream，too．I want to be a teacher to hlp the children in poor areas．From now on，I must work hard，correct my own shortcomings and improve myself．I will never give up my dream whenever facing difficulties．I'm sure my dream will come true．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇圖畫加提綱的作文，寫作內(nèi)容主要分兩塊，1．介紹Tom的成功的例子．2．介紹自己的理想以及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)．在第二點(diǎn)上，需要學(xué)生充分發(fā)揮自己的能力，展開想象．介紹Tom時(shí)，要用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，介紹自己的夢(mèng)想時(shí)，要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)．

解答 Everyone has his/her dream．The one who never gives up can achieve his/her goal．Tom is a very good example．He was born in a poor family．His parents didn't have enough money to pay for his study so that he couldn't go to school．He was very sad，but nothing could stop him from studying．He kept on learning by himself at home．At last，he got high grades and 
entered his ideal college．Unfortunately，a terrible accident happened to his parents．During the time he was at college，he did part-time jobs for a living and took good care of his parents．Because he followed his dream all the time，he became the owner of a large farm successfully．
    I have my own dream，too．I want to be a teacher to hlp the children in poor areas．From now on，I must work hard，correct my own shortcomings and improve myself．I will never give up my dream whenever facing difficulties．I'm sure my dream will come true．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是看圖作文與提綱作文的結(jié)合，內(nèi)容看似很多，實(shí)際上主要分成兩大塊，首先要求按照所給圖畫，通過(guò)所給信息，把內(nèi)容正確地表達(dá)出來(lái)，然后展開想象，完整好自己的夢(mèng)想以及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)．人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換是本文的重點(diǎn)和難點(diǎn)．