Question

14．請以“My favorite teacher”為題，根據以下提示，用英語寫一篇不少于60詞的短文．標點符號不占格．
提示 （短文須包含下列要點）：
（1）What subject does your favorite teacher teach？
（2）What does he/she look like？And how about his/her personal traits（性格）？
（3）Tell a story about how he/she helped you．
（4）What do you want to say to him/her when you meet in the future？
注意：短文中，老師的姓名請一律使用Mr Wang或Ms Wang，不得出現(xiàn)任何真實人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分．
My favorite teacher
My favorite teacher is Ms．Wang．She is a 36-year-old woman．（外貌）But she is tall and has long straight hair．And she often wears black pants and a white shirt．（所授學科）She teaches us English．We all like listening to her．Her classes are very interesting and creative．Because she has different ways of teaching．But she is very strict with us in everything．（性格）She is warm-hearted．We all know she is always ready to help others．When we are in trouble，she can try her best to help us．（一個故事）Once my Englishwas reallypoor，Ihad no interest about it．when she noticed this，she didn’t blame me，she told me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English，she asked me to watch English movie，it worked．（我要說的話）when wemeetinthefuture，I will say“many thanks”to her．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，本文所給要點是幾個問題，故動筆前先要閱讀要點，找出問題的答案．寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將問題所涉及內容表達完整；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般過去時態(tài)進行敘述．語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系．可用句型有如：be strict with對…嚴格；be ready to do sth準備做某事；in trouble處于困難中；try one’s best do to sth盡力做某事等

解答 My favorite teacher
My favorite teacher is Ms．Wang．She is a 36-year-old woman．（外貌）But she is tall and has long straight hair．And she often wears black pants and a white shirt．（所授學科）She teaches us English．We all like listening to her．Her classes are very interesting and creative．Because she has different ways of teaching．But she is very strict with us in everything．（性格）She is warm-hearted．We all know she is always ready to help others．When we are in trouble，she can try her best to help us．（一個故事）Once my English was really poor，I had no interest about it．when she noticed this，she didn’t blame me，she told me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English，she asked me to watch English movie，it worked．（我要說的話）when we meet in the future，I will say“many thanks”to her．

點評 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領悟，考生在審題上一般不會出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據內容要點提示運用相關的句型結構靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．