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17．親愛的同學(xué)，你的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，請你以"My English Study"為題，
談一下三年來學(xué)習(xí)英語的心得體會．
1、要點包括：你在英語學(xué)習(xí)中所遇到的困難、解決的辦法以及學(xué)習(xí)感悟；
2、字數(shù)要求：不少于80字．
My English Study
How time flies!My three-year middle school life will be over soon．Looking back I have many memories of my English study．
When I entered the middle school，I had so many difficulties with my English．I was not able to understand the teacher in class，and I couldn't master the words and phrases．For a time I wanted to give it up．Later，with the help of the teacher and my classmates，I listened to the teacher carefully in class，kept on reading English every day and spoke English as much as possible．Step by step I made great progress in English．
In a word，only when you develop interest in studying English can youlearnit well．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹自己學(xué)習(xí)英語的心得體會，寫作中注意從三個方面進行敘述1你在英語學(xué)習(xí)中所遇到的困難.2解決的辦法．3學(xué)習(xí)感悟．通過材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱主要第一人稱，用一般過去時．動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞，句式短語等．適當(dāng)使用連接詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
重點短語和句型：give up放棄，with the help of在…幫助下，as much as possible盡可能多的，keep on doing sth堅持做某事，make progress進步等等

解答 My English Study
   How time flies!My three-year middle school life will be over soon．Looking back I have many memories of my English study．．（引出下文）
   When I entered the middle school，I had so many difficulties with my English．I was not able to understand the teacher in class，and I couldn't master the words and phrases．For a time I wanted to give it up．（遇到的困難） Later，with the help of the teacher and my classmates，I listened to the teacher carefully in class，kept on reading English every day and spoke English as much as possible（高分句型）．Step by step I made great progress in English． （解決的辦法）
   In a word，only when you develop interest in studying English can youlearnit well（感受）（高分句型）．

點評 此題為應(yīng)用文寫作．首先要仔細審題，嚴(yán)格按照要求去寫作．其次要注意時態(tài)人稱的選擇；再次行文中要語句通順，注意上下句的銜接，用英語式的思維去組織每個句子，避免受漢語的影響．采用不同的句式，盡量避免重復(fù)．注意不要出現(xiàn)單詞，語法和時態(tài)等的錯誤．這樣的文章就是好文章