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書面表達（共1題，計15分）
隨著我市創(chuàng)衛(wèi)工作的不斷推進，鹽城已成為一個具有現(xiàn)代化氣息的城市, 它吸引著許多游客來此旅游、投資、學習。展示鹽城人民的精神風貌是每一位鹽城人的職責。請以  “To Be Lovely Yanchengnese為題寫一篇短文。
要點如下：
社會公德 (如：主動讓座、遵守交通規(guī)則、助人為樂)
環(huán)境保護 (如：保護花草樹木、節(jié)約能源)
公共禮儀 (如：在公共場所不抽煙、不大聲喧嘩、不亂扔垃圾)
作為學生，我們應(yīng)該……（不少于兩點）
參考詞語：遵守交通規(guī)則 obey the traffic rules, 花草樹木 plants and trees
注意：不要逐句翻譯以上要點，可適當發(fā)揮。
詞數(shù)： 80左右，標點符號不占格。文章開頭已給出，不計入詞總數(shù)。
To Be Lovely Yanchengnese
Yancheng is developing quickly. It has become a modern city. To be lovely Yanchengnese, we should try our best to show its beauty. We should
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

Yancheng is developing quickly. It has become a modern city. To be lovely Yanchengnese, we should try our best to show its beauty.We should obey the traffic rules. We should take care of plants and trees. And we mustn't spit in public or throw everywhere. We shouldn’t smoke or talk loudly in public.
As middle school students, we should respect our teachers and the old. We should also get on well with each other friendly and be polite to other people. Besides, we should be always ready to help each other. Do you agree with us?Let's start from ourselves !

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，所給材料要點清晰，要求明確，話題內(nèi)容貼近學生學習生活實際，考生有較大的發(fā)揮空間。動筆前要認真審題，勾勒要點，并適當發(fā)揮。行文中要注意人稱、時態(tài)的變化及主謂一致問題。同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內(nèi)容，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上注意句式的轉(zhuǎn)換。同時，使用了一些常用的句式和短語，如：we should/shouldn’t/mustn't 、take care of、get on well with each other、 be polite to、be ready to以及連接詞and、or、besides等，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意積累，背誦一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。