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17．當(dāng)前，全市各學(xué)校正開(kāi)展"好書(shū)伴我成長(zhǎng)"活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)活動(dòng)主題并結(jié)合表格中所給信息，以"Growing up with good books"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100-120詞的倡議書(shū)，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議．

讀書(shū)的益處	獲取知識(shí)，增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí)，使人快樂(lè)．
存在的現(xiàn)象	聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，看電視，上網(wǎng)，占用了大部分業(yè)余時(shí)間．
發(fā)出倡議	多讀書(shū)，讀經(jīng)典好書(shū)．向世界傳播中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化． 讓讀書(shū)成為我們生活的一部分

要求：
（1）倡議書(shū)應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn)；
（2）倡議書(shū)的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Growing up with good books
My dear friends，
Reading is very important．（益處）We can get knowledge through reading．It can not only open our minds，but also make us clever and happier．Our study can be improved if we read more good books．The more we read，the more we will learn，and the brighter our future will become．
（現(xiàn)象）However，some students spend much time in listening to music，watching TV or going on line to play games．It takes much of their spare time．（倡議）So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books，especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world．
Let's start reading now．And let it become a part of our life!．

Answer 1

分析 首先我們應(yīng)該注意文章的體裁是應(yīng)用文，那就要注意應(yīng)用文的寫(xiě)作特點(diǎn)和格式．其次要注意時(shí)態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．用第三人稱(chēng)和第一人稱(chēng)，再次要注意內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，有三點(diǎn)：1．讀書(shū)的益處．2．存在的現(xiàn)象．3．發(fā)出倡議．不要有漏啦．最后要注意條理清晰，語(yǔ)言具有感染力．重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：not only …but also …，The more…the more，spend much time in，so that等

解答 答案：
My dear friends，
Reading is very important．（益處）We can get knowledge through reading．It can not only open our minds，but also make us clever and happier．Our study can be improved if we read more good books．The more we read，the more we will learn，and the brighter our future will become．
（現(xiàn)象）However，some students spend much time in listening to music，watching TV or going on line to play games．It takes much of their spare time．（倡議）So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books，especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world．
Let's start reading now．And let it become a part of our life!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱類(lèi)型的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．