Question

15．假期里，你去哪兒旅行過(guò)呢？把你印象最深的地方用英語(yǔ)寫下來(lái)吧，讓我們一起來(lái)分享你的快樂．請(qǐng)以"My last holiday"為題，寫一篇短文．內(nèi)容包括：什么時(shí)間去哪里旅行的，怎樣去的，和誰(shuí)一起去的，參觀了哪些地方，干了什么事情以及你的感受如何等等．
寫作要求：
1．語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，詞數(shù)大約60-100．
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)校名和姓名等信息．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I was ①so happy that I found ②it useful to learn English我很開心我發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)很有用．
①so…that如此…以至于，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．
②it作為形式賓語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正賓語(yǔ)．
【高分句型二】
We felt so excited when we watched the dolphin show．當(dāng)我看海豚表演的時(shí)候我很興奮．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 My last holiday
Last May Day holiday，My parents and I went to Nan Tong by bus（時(shí)間地點(diǎn)，交通方式，和誰(shuí)一起）．We stay there for two days．This experience impressed me most．On the morning of the first day，we went sightseeing on the Wolf Hill．I met a foreigner and talked in English when I climbed the hill．I was so happy that I found it useful to learn English．【高分句型一】（游覽狼山風(fēng)景）Then we went to the Horticultural Exposition．We enjoyed many kinds of flowers and took lots of photos．We learned a lot about the flowers．We felt so close to nature and had a lot of fun there．（賞園藝博覽園）
 In the afternoon，I learned a lot about the names of the fish when we enjoyed the Undersea World．We felt so excited when we watched the dolphin show．【高分句型二】（觀賞海底世界）The second day，we took a boat trip on the Haohe River．I enjoyed the beautiful views （and sang happily） all the way．（暢游美麗濠河）
We had such an exciting trip that we will never forget it．We hope to visit it again some day．（感受）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無(wú)把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣