Question

對(duì)于學(xué)校要求“在校學(xué)生必須穿校服”這項(xiàng)規(guī)定，同學(xué)們反響很大，議論紛份。有人叫好，有人反對(duì)，以下是部分同學(xué)的意見(jiàn)，請(qǐng)你看完后，寫一篇作文并發(fā)表自己的看法。

同意穿校服（60%）	1、少花錢在衣服上 2、對(duì)外表的關(guān)注減少，把精力更多地集中在學(xué)習(xí)上
同意穿自己的衣服（40%）	1、校服不好看，不能顯示個(gè)性 2、校服質(zhì)量不夠好，不舒服
你的觀點(diǎn)	……

  要求：1、不少于100字。
2、所給內(nèi)容必須全部用上，并合理發(fā)揮。
3、參考詞匯
school uniform  show off one’s personality  quality（質(zhì)量）
concentrate on（集中注意力在……上）  care about
something fashionable
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Answer 1

One possible version：
At our school, we have to wear school uniforms every day. But not all of the students agree to obey the rules.
Most students, about 60 percent agree the rule, especially those whose families are not rich enough. They think parents may spend less money in buying clothes. And it can help students not to care too much about they way they look. As a result, they would concentrate more on their studies. But 40 percent of the students don’t agree to wear the school uniform. They think the uniforms are ugly. Wearing the same clothes doesn’t make them look cool, and they like to wearing their own clothes to show off their per sonality. Beside this, school uniforms are usually not comfortable because the quality isn’t good enough.
In my opinion, we are teenagers, we like to look different and cool. We hope to choose clothes by ourselves. But as a student, I think we should wear school uniforms on weekdays. In other words, you can wear any clothes you like at weekends.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以在寫作時(shí)，要尤其一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: spend less money in buying clothes.；it can help students not to care too much about they way they look；As a result；In my opinion,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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