Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是Annie，你的筆友Mary發(fā)郵件問起你的家鄉(xiāng)、學(xué)校生活等情況，請你用英語回一封郵件告之。

內(nèi)容包括以下幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：

家鄉(xiāng)	現(xiàn)代化城市，離上海不遠(yuǎn)。以美味的食物聞名全國，是個(gè)居住的好地方。
學(xué)校	位于城市的西南部，干凈、美麗。有圖書館、閱覽室、電腦房……
班級	教室在三樓。班上同學(xué)很友好，樂于助人……（舉一例）
學(xué)習(xí)	勤奮，……（補(bǔ)充1點(diǎn)）
愛好	喜愛戶外活動，……（補(bǔ)充1點(diǎn)）

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．郵件的開頭、結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；

3．郵件須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使其連貫、通順；

4. 郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

Dear Mary,

Thanks for your last e-mail. Now let me tell you something about my home town, my school and my life here.

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I love my hometown and enjoy my school life.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Annie

Answer 1

【答案】

My hometown Jingjiangis a modern city, and it’s not far away from Shanghai. It’s famous for its nice food all over China. I think it’s a good place to live.

My school is in the south-east of our city. It’s clean and beautiful. We have a big library, a reading-room, two music rooms ,one art room and two computer rooms. We also have a big playground.

My classroom is on the third floor. My classmates are very friendly and helpful. When we have problems, we often help each other.

I work hard on all my subjects, but I’m not good at Chinese. I need to read more and speak more.

I like outdoor activities. My favoutite outdoor activity is camping, because I like being outside, near beautiful lakes and hills.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，是作者Annie寫給筆友Mary的一封電子郵件，文中介紹了家鄉(xiāng)，學(xué)校的請情況。本文要寫的材料比較具體，我們要做的就是運(yùn)用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。我們要好好選用詞匯和短語，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文中用一般現(xiàn)在的時(shí)態(tài)來寫。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用準(zhǔn)確。