Question

7．在家庭里、在社會(huì)中，只要我們從自身做起，我們的行為就可以為實(shí)現(xiàn)和諧社會(huì)（harmonious society）起到推進(jìn)作用．你們學(xué)校的English Newsletter正在以Doing Our Part（從自身做起）為題舉行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇征文．

	行    為	作    用
在家庭里	（1）幫助父母做家務(wù)事 （2）和父母多交流	（1）讓父母不太累 （2）…
在社會(huì)中	（1）不亂扔垃圾 （2）… （3）…	（1）使環(huán)境美化 （2）… （3）…
展望：如果我們每個(gè)人…

要求：1．表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2．必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
4．不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等．
Doing Our Part
We have grown up and it's time for us to do something for our family and society．
At home，we should help our parents do the housework．They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full day's work．We do the house in order to let them have a rest．We should also talk with them more，it can help us understand each other better．
In society，do not throw rubbish everywhere，we should throw it into the dustbin．It can make our environment more beautiful．Don't use plastic bags when going shopping，we'd better use shopping baskets．If we use them too often，it will become white pollution．
In a word，if each of us do our part from now on，our world will become a harmonious society．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇表格給出信息的提綱類作文．內(nèi)容為根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容以Doing Our Part為題，為實(shí)現(xiàn)和諧社會(huì)（harmonious society）寫一篇征文．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱為第一人稱．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．引入話題；2．在家里我們應(yīng)當(dāng)做的事和作用；3．在社會(huì)上，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)做的事和作用；4．對(duì)未來(lái)的展望．常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：it is time for sb to do sth，must表推測(cè)，in order to do，had better do，in a word等．

解答 Doing Our Part
We have grown up and it's time for us to do something for our family and society．
At home，we should help our parents do the housework．They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full day's work．We do the house in order to let them have a rest．We should also talk with them more，it can help us understand each other better．
In society，do not throw rubbish everywhere，we should throw it into the dustbin．It can make our environment more beautiful．Don't use plastic bags when going shopping，we'd better use shopping baskets．If we use them too often，it will become white pollution．
In a word，if each of us do our part from now on，our world will become a harmonious society．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱類作文．通過(guò)給出題目及表格限制了考生作文的范疇．它要求考生緊扣題目主題，并根據(jù)提綱提示的思路和要點(diǎn)展開段落．考生在作文時(shí)需注意內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)句流暢，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤及書寫規(guī)范．