Question

15．昨天（周六），你和你的朋友去離家不遠(yuǎn)的"人民公園"進(jìn)行了一次野餐．根據(jù)提示次寫一篇詞數(shù)在60-80之間的作文．要求表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語意完整．（提示詞要全部用上）
提示詞：far，early，bike，sing，dance，lunch，football，late，tired，happy，exciting．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
After we arrived there，we took photos，flew kites and told jokes我們到達(dá)那里之后，我們照相，放風(fēng)箏和講笑話．
after引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
And we are all looking forward to our next picnic我們都期待下一次的野餐．
look forward to sth期待某事．

解答 My name is Li Lei．I went to People's Park for a picnic with my classmates yesterday．（交待時(shí)間地點(diǎn)人物）We met at the school gate．We took lots of food and drinks with us，such as sandwiches，vegetables，fruit and some juice．（食物飲料）It is very far from our school，so we left school early．After we arrived there，we took photos，flew kites and told jokes【高分句型一】．We also had a hapy meal while enjoying the beautiful views of People's Park．After lunch，boys played football and girls sang and danced．（活動）It was really an exciting experience．We all had a good time that day．Although we were tired，we were happy．And we are all looking forward to our next picnic【高分句型二】．（感受）

點(diǎn)評 能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)．