Question

5．為迎接中考，你常常復習功課到深夜．請根據(jù)下列圖畫用英語寫一篇90詞左右的日記．
注意：1  開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名．

I often stay up late to go over my lessons．Last night                               ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文，內(nèi)容是根據(jù)所給圖畫寫一篇日記，記敘自己的一天．文章時態(tài)是一般過去時為主，人稱是第一人稱，寫作的過程中注意找準圖片信息，要點要全，細節(jié)可以適當增加，以使行文連貫，還要注意條理清晰，使用一些過渡詞及復合句，來給文章增色．
高分句型：
①When I woke up this morning，I found it was already 7o'clock．今天早晨當我醒來的時候，我發(fā)現(xiàn)已經(jīng)七點鐘了．句子中when引導一個時間狀語從句，wake up醒來，I found 后面跟的是一個賓語從句．
②I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of being late．因為遲到，我害怕我會受到老師的懲罰．I was afraid 后面跟的是一個賓語從句，because of 因為，由于，of是一個介詞，后面應(yīng)該跟動詞的ing形式．

解答 Saturday，March 26，2016 Fine
I often stay up late to go over my lessons（引出話題）．Last night I didn't go to bed until 12o'clock．When I woke up this morning，I found it was already 7o'clock（高分句型）．I put on my clothes，brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly．Then I rushed into the living-room，where Mother was cooking breakfast．Before she could say anything，I got my school bag，ran out and got on my bike．I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of being late（高分句型）．So I rode as fast as I could．It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school．To my surprise，I found the schoolgate was closed．Then I realized it was Saturday．（敘述我星期六去上學的經(jīng)過）

點評 考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)．要求介紹．同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．