Question

2．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the Topic"A lucky_______"
（以一個/件/…幸運的_____為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格子．）
注意：補全題目，記敘或描述你認為幸運的人/物/事…..，并闡述理由．
A lucky person
Speaking of a lucky person，I myself come into my mind．I have a happy family，which not only gives me plenty of love，but also teaches me how to love and to be thankful．Wherever I am and whatever I have experienced，my parents are the ones who always stand by my side．Besides，I have a lot of friends，who can share happiness and sorrow with me． When I feel depressed，they always give me comfort and encouragement．I am grateful for all that I have and feel that I am very lucky．In my opinion，everyone can be a lucky person if they have a sense of gratitude and the feeling of optimism．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I have a happy family，which not only gives me plenty of love，but also teaches me how to love and to be thankful．我有一個快樂的家庭，不僅僅給我很多愛也教會我怎樣去愛和感恩．
which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句．
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
【高分句型二】
 When I feel depressed，they always give me comfort and encouragement當我感到沮喪的時候，他們總是給我安慰和鼓勵．
when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．

解答 A lucky person
Speaking of a lucky person，I myself come into my mind．（點題）I have a happy family，which not only gives me plenty of love，but also teaches me how to love and to be thankful．【高分句型一】Wherever I am and whatever I have experienced，my parents are the ones who always stand by my side．Besides，I have a lot of friends，who can share happiness and sorrow with me． When I feel depressed，they always give me comfort and encouragement【高分句型二】．I am grateful for all that I have and feel that I am very lucky．（原因）In my opinion，everyone can be a lucky person if they have a sense of gratitude and the feeling of optimism．（感受）

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