Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請以The school life in the future 為題，結(jié)合下面的中文提示寫一遍100字左右的作文。隨著科技的發(fā)展，未來的學(xué)校生活將會與現(xiàn)在的學(xué)校生活有很大的不同。

2．機器人將幫助學(xué)生做家庭作業(yè)。

3．每個學(xué)生將有一臺和星系網(wǎng)絡(luò)相聯(lián)的電腦，學(xué)生可以和電子教師在網(wǎng)校學(xué)習(xí)。

4．足不出戶，你可以知道（1）天安門是世界上最大的城市廣場，每天清晨大量游客聚集在那兒看國旗的升起。（2）桂林四周矗立著形狀各異的高山。令人嘆為觀止的是有許多造型各異的巖石，洞穴被譽為“大自然的藝術(shù)宮殿”；（3）居里夫人一生獲得兩次諾貝爾獎，并推動了x光線機器的使用。(4)再舉一偉人的例子,并寫明其成就。

Answer 1

【答案】

The school life in the future

With the development of science and technology, the school life in the future will be different from the present school life.

In the future, the school life will be much better. Maybe there will be robots helping students do homework. Each student will have a computer connected to the network and the galaxy. Students and teachers will be learning in the school of electronic.

Indoors, you can know that the Tiananmen Square is the largest city square in the world. Every morning a large number of tourists gathered there to see the flag rising. that towering mountains around the Guilin. It is amazing that there are many different shapes of rock, the cave is known as the "nature's Art Palace"; Curie's life won the Nobel prize two times, and promote the use of X ray machine.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中正確使用比較形式，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文內(nèi)容合理，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，段落清晰，要點齊全。