Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)（15分）

（1）Ann 和Anna 一樣高，Anna比Ann外向，但是Ann的成績(jī)比Anna好。

（2）Ann 和Anna都很健康，因?yàn)樗齻兠刻於煎憻�，一星期要吃四至五次的蔬菜，而且從不吃垃圾食品�?/span>

（3）上個(gè)周六，她們和同學(xué)們一起騎車去人民公園（the People’s Park）玩了，上午做游戲，下午拍很多照，玩得很開(kāi)心。

Ann and Anna are my classmates. They are twin sisters.

Answer 1

【答案】

Ann and Anna are my classmates. They are twin sisters.

Ann is as tall as Anna and Anna is more outgoing than Ann while Ann is better at learning than Anna. They are both healthy because they take exercises every day. They eat vegetable four or five times a week and they never eat junk food. They lead a healthy life.

Last week ,they with his classmates went to the People’s Park.. They played games in the morning and in the afternoon, they took lots of photos ,which make them happy. They had a good time.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是給提綱類作文，要求按提綱提示對(duì)雙胞胎姐妹Ann和Anna進(jìn)行描寫。提綱提示了三個(gè)方面，一是兩人的身高、性格、成績(jī)，主要考查比較結(jié)構(gòu)；二是兩個(gè)的健康習(xí)慣，主要考查帶有頻率副詞的一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的句子，要注意頻率副詞的準(zhǔn)確性及在句子中的位置；三是寫上周六她們?nèi)ト嗣窆珗@的情況，考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。要注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確構(gòu)成，也就是動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的準(zhǔn)確使用。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文提到很多不錯(cuò)的短語(yǔ)如 be good at 擅長(zhǎng)做某事，lead a ..life 過(guò)著…生活，take photos 照相。Anna is more outgoing that Ann while Ann is better at learning than Anna這句話中while表對(duì)比，使這句話形成鮮明前后對(duì)比。They eat vegetable five times a week and never eat junk food.這句話中and連接兩個(gè)并且的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。They played games in the morning and in the afternoon, they took lots of photos ,which make them happy.這句話中出現(xiàn)了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。這些都使本文更生動(dòng)。