Question

【題目】書面表達

請你以“My Living Habits”為題寫一篇介紹你自己的生活習慣的短文，詞數(shù)70左右，首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

My Living Habits

Now let me tell you something about my living habits.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Living Habits

Now let me tell you something about my living habits. I have a lot of good habits. I exercise every day and always read books. I eat vegetables three times a day and eat fruit five to six times a week. They are good for health. I never stay up late. I sleep about nine hours every night. However, I have some bad habits, too. I often watch TV for more than two hours a day and hardly ever help with housework at home. I like eating junk food and never drink milk.

These are my living habits. What about yours?

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為開放性作文，先給出素材，讓考生在此基礎(chǔ)上發(fā)揮。此外，只規(guī)定了寫作方向，并無具體的寫作要點，這就使得寫作的難度更大、要求更高。而與此同時也讓考生思維和寫作能力得到了極致的發(fā)揮。當然，寫作時尤要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)的合理，表述的條理性和準確性。

寫作亮點：該范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點全面（第一段：準確概括素材，并列舉具體措施；第二段：總結(jié)概括，并提出反問），語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫。尤為突出之處在于，短語的巧妙運用，例如：a lot of；three times a day；are good for；stay up late；help with等等，簡單且表達準確。