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8．假設(shè)你是無(wú)錫日?qǐng)?bào)英文周刊English Weekly的特約小記者，請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡指定的位置上，以"A New Town"為題，寫一則80詞左右的簡(jiǎn)訊，介紹我市的太湖新城（Taihu New Town）．內(nèi)容提示見(jiàn)下表：

簡(jiǎn)介	位于無(wú)錫南部，近五年來(lái)變化巨大
過(guò)去	有很多大型工廠
現(xiàn)在	政府已遷走所有工廠，空氣清新，沒(méi)有污染
問(wèn)題	尚存一些，其中之一是公交線路太少
展望	…

注意：
1．簡(jiǎn)訊須包括表格內(nèi)所有信息，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
2．表格中"展望"欄，請(qǐng)用自己的2-3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．簡(jiǎn)訊的標(biāo)題已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
A New Town
TaihuNew Town is in the south of Whxi．It has changed a lot in the past five years．Thereused to be many big factories here．The government has moved them all away，sothe air is fresh and there is no pollution．There are still a few problems．Oneof them is there are too few bus lines．But I believe all these problems willbe solved soon．The new town will become a wonderful place to live．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"A New Town"為題，寫一則80詞左右的簡(jiǎn)訊，介紹我市的太湖新城．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．簡(jiǎn)介 位于無(wú)錫南部，近五年來(lái)變化巨大
2．過(guò)去 有很多大型工廠
3．現(xiàn)在 政府已遷走所有工廠，空氣清新，沒(méi)有污染
4．問(wèn)題 尚存一些，其中之一是公交線路太少
5．展望 …
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
in the south of 在…的南邊
used to do 過(guò)去常常
move away 搬走
there be 有
【高分句型】
1．The government has moved them all away，so the air is fresh and there is no pollution．
so連詞，表示所以，不能和because連用．
2．But I believe①all these problems ②will be solved soon．
①believe后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②一般將來(lái)時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)will+be+過(guò)去分詞．
3．The new town will become a wonderful place to live
動(dòng)詞不定式做后置定語(yǔ)，修飾place．

解答 A New Town
Taihu New Town is in the south of Whxi．It has changed a lot in the past five years．（簡(jiǎn)介）There used to be many big factories here．（過(guò)去）The government has moved them all away，so the air is fresh and there is no pollution．【高分句型】（現(xiàn)在）There are still a few problems．One of them is there are too few bus lines．（問(wèn)題）But I believe all these problems will be solved soon．【高分句型】The new town will become a wonderful place to live．【高分句型】（展望）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，寫作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ)，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．