Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)(共15分)

以上新聞播出后，你們學(xué)校決定組織一次“Planting Trees for the Earth”植樹(shù)活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是班長(zhǎng)，你要?jiǎng)訂T你班同學(xué)參加這次活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)完成你的發(fā)言稿。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1.根據(jù)信件內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)單介紹森林的現(xiàn)狀并分析造成這種狀況的原因。

2.闡明植樹(shù)的意義：至少?gòu)膬蓚�(gè)方面說(shuō)明樹(shù)木對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)的作用。

3.提出如何保護(hù)樹(shù)木的建議（至少三點(diǎn)）。

要求：

字?jǐn)?shù)70-80，己給出的句子不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。

Dear fellow students,

Forests are important to the environment.

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That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

Forests are important to the environment. But more and more forests are disappearing around the world every year. That is because of people’s cutting down trees and kinds of pollution like farming and tourism pollution and so on. As we know, trees are very useful to the environment. They can keep the water and stop the soil from washing away. They can cool the air and make our cities less noisy. Trees can prevent the climate from getting warmer and warmer. They can keep the balance of nature. Without trees, humans and animals would die. So we must protect trees, plant more trees and take care of them.

In order to protect our evironment, our school is planning an activity “Plant Trees for the Earth”. Let’s join in the activity together.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以植樹(shù)節(jié)為導(dǎo)線寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于保護(hù)森林資源的作文。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫(xiě)作提綱，主要包括三大部分的內(nèi)容。一是分析現(xiàn)在森林資源現(xiàn)狀及其原因；另一個(gè)是闡明植樹(shù)的意義，最后是表明自己的建議和觀點(diǎn)。提綱雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時(shí)積累的知識(shí)。另外，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者從三個(gè)方面闡釋了全文，這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如As we know, trees are very useful to the environment.正如我們所知道的，樹(shù)木對(duì)我們的環(huán)境很有幫助；They can cool the air and make our cities less noisy.他們能凈化空氣，減少噪音的污染。