Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)：（滿分25分）

根據(jù)中文提示寫(xiě)一篇八十詞左右的短文

題目: “Our School Life”

要點(diǎn)提示: 

1學(xué)校情況	No.4 Middle School, have 18classes,get up early, have much homework, be busy,
2 學(xué)校的課余生活	Do exercises, play with friends, read books, listen to music
3 你對(duì)你的學(xué)校生活的看法如何	Interesting, happy, love our school ……

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

I am a student of No.4 Middle School. Because we＇ve got 18 classes every day. We are all busy all day and have so much homework to do that we. After class, we can sometimes do exercises, and play with my friends. Besides, I can read books in the library or listen to music.I wonder whether we can change our school life some day. I don＇t think our school life is colorful.I hope we will have more activities such as visiting museums, taking part in different kinds of contests, attending some lectures and so on. Is it only a dream?

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章簡(jiǎn)單明了介紹了自己的學(xué)校生活，也提出了自己的建議。文中使用了have sth todo，besides等較高級(jí)的語(yǔ)法和詞匯，而且還應(yīng)用了否定轉(zhuǎn)移以及使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞如：because，and等以及非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等為文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。