Question

5．學(xué)會分享很重要．你有哪些東西要分享？可采取哪些方式分享？請根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，寫一篇短文，并闡述分享的意義．
要求：
1．要點齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開頭已給出、不記入總詞數(shù)）．
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)佼名稱．
Sharing
It's very important to learn to share with each other．There are many things to share in different ways．For example，I can share some beautiful pictures，favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by QQ．e-mail which are widely used．Now I'd like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you．
Emily was lonely and unhappy．I hoped to cheer her up．So I shared my favorite books and chatted with her after class．As time went by，she became used to sharing her feelings with me．Now we're good friends．
In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up．We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more．．

Answer 1

分析 此篇書面表達(dá)的話題是"學(xué)會分享"．首先我們根據(jù)給出的樹形的思維導(dǎo)圖確定要寫的內(nèi)容的提綱，包括：分享什么？怎么分享？為什么分享？然后根據(jù)每個提綱給出的一些關(guān)鍵詞，拓展思維，寫出自己的看法．最后，我們還要注意"學(xué)會分享"的情感教育，讓我們學(xué)有所獲．

解答 One possible version：
                                                     Sharing
    It's very important to learn to share with each other．There are many things to share in different ways．For example，I can share some beautiful pictures，favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by QQ．e-mail which are widely used．Now I'd like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you．
   Emily was lonely and unhappy．I hoped to cheer her up．So I shared my favorite books and chatted with her after class．As time went by，she became used to sharing her feelings with me．Now we're good friends．
   In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up．We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more．

點評 無論是哪一種書面表達(dá)形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順、要素完整，語言準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯誤，標(biāo)點符號正確，能達(dá)到內(nèi)容完整的目的．