Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你最好的朋友叫Tom, 他身上有許多優(yōu)良的品質(zhì)，請(qǐng)以My best friend 為題，把你的朋友向大家做個(gè)介紹。

姓名	Tom
班級(jí)	七年級(jí)一班
興趣愛好	1. 最喜歡金魚，喜歡觀看它們游來游去。 喜歡各種戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)，常去野營(yíng)，喜歡呆在外面。
能力	1. 文章寫得好、鋼琴?gòu)椀煤?/span> 2.思維敏捷、計(jì)劃周密
品性事跡	1. 樂于助人。是社區(qū)中心的志愿者，幫助人們解決各種問題。經(jīng)常參加為貧困的孩子募集錢這樣的活動(dòng)。 2. 勇敢(舉一例)

要求：1. 條理清楚，語意連貫。

2. 書寫規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確。

3. 正文80字左右。

My best friend

Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend

Tom is my best friend. He is in Class One Grade Seven. He has many hobbies and interests. He likes goldfish best and he likes watching them swim around. He also loves all kinds of outdoor. He often goes camping because he likes being outside.

Tom has different abilities. He writes god articles and plays the piano well. He learns things quickly and plans everything well.

Tom has many good qualities. He is helpful. He is a volunteer at the community center. He is ready to help people with all kinds of problems. He often takes part in activities like raising money for poor children. He is also brave. Last week, he helped his neighbor out of the fire.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己最喜歡的朋友。考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。由于是朋友介紹，人稱應(yīng)為第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。列舉的事例可用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)來表達(dá)。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文按照寫作要求，根據(jù)漢語提示，用簡(jiǎn)潔的語言，準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出漢語意思，語言流暢。本文寫作思路清晰，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來描述。寫作層次分明，分別寫出了自己最好朋友的情趣愛好，能力，品質(zhì)及主要事跡。