Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

學(xué)校正在召開(kāi)以“憶過(guò)去，談現(xiàn)在，想未來(lái)”為題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。假設(shè)你是李雷請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一份約80字演講稿。

	Some years ago	These days	In the future
Personality	quiet	more outgoing	active
Hobby or plan	1. stay at home 2. read	1.TV shows(talk Shows,learn from them) 2.do sports often	1……. 2……

要求：演講稿必須包括表格所提供的信息，關(guān)于未來(lái)的“Hobby or plan”至少寫(xiě)2條

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have changed a lot over the years. In the past, I used to be quiet. I always stayed at home and read.

But now, I am more outgoing. I like watching TV. I like talk shows best because I think I can learn a lot from them. I often do sports after class. I think I will be active in the future. I’ll practice playing basketball harder and harder. I hope I can become a basketball player when I grow up. Becoming a player is a hard job. But I believe I can do.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文中要用到一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了一些固定短語(yǔ)如a lot，used to，learn a lot from，harder and harder等等，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。