Question

【題目】學(xué)習(xí)方法、自我反思、合作交流、同伴互評(píng)是學(xué)習(xí)過程中幾個(gè)重要的方面。其中，有效的學(xué)習(xí)方法能使你的學(xué)習(xí)境界大開，讓學(xué)習(xí)成為一種享受。

在你初中幾年的學(xué)習(xí)過程中，你一定會(huì)有好的學(xué)習(xí)方法與你的同伴分享，請(qǐng)按以下要求寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：

● your good learning methods

● an experience that you helped your partners

● your thoughts and feelings

要求：

1. 詞數(shù)：80-100，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 語法正確，語言流暢，表達(dá)正確，邏輯清晰；

4. 結(jié)構(gòu)合理，詞匯準(zhǔn)確，書寫清晰規(guī)范。

My Good Learning Methods

Good learners must have good learning methods.

Answer 1

【答案】

Good learners must have good ways. Discussing in a group really helps us have a better understanding of what we’ve learned. It broadens our mind and allows us more chances to express our thought.

Shy and nervous, my classmate Jeff used to hide himself behind books. Answering questions in public was a quite difficult job for him. Once， our math teacher asked us to solve a difficult question. I encouraged Jeff to discuss his idea with us. We found his way was so creative. Then we advised him to write his answer on the blackboard and explain it to us. Believe it or not, he did it and we saw his great improvement after that.

Discussing in a group not only makes me enjoy the happiness of being a good learner but also deepens the friendship between Jeff and me. Knowledge comes from communicating and questioning. By discussing, we learn more wisely and better.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)方法的寫作，內(nèi)容要包括好的學(xué)習(xí)方法，你幫助你的搭檔的經(jīng)歷，以及你的感想。它可以寫成一篇夾敘夾議的記敘文，用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)根據(jù)實(shí)際情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。寫作時(shí)，注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性和流暢性，可以加入一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)和邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)： 這篇文章緊扣題目要求，對(duì)事情的描述非常清楚有序，而且文章用了不同的句式，如：Discussing in a group really helps us have a better understanding of what we’ve learned.句中用動(dòng)名詞做主語，of后接了個(gè)賓語從句。Discussing in a group not only makes me enjoy the happiness of being a good learner but also deepens the friendship between Jeff and me.句中not only…but also…不僅，而且。