Question

7．初中的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束了．請你以"How I Change"為題，寫一篇短文，描述你這三年里前后的變化．寫作要點包括外貌、興趣愛好、行為習(xí)慣等方面．
寫作要求：1）詞數(shù)在80個左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2）短文中不能出現(xiàn)校名和人名，否則不得分；
3）所給的寫作要點都必須用上；緊扣主題，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
How I Change
My life has changed a lot in the past three years．     ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容為以"How I Change"為題敘述初中三年前后的變化，時態(tài)主要為一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．本文的寫作要點：1．三年前的我；2．三年后的我
常用到的重點句型和短語：
in the past…years過去的幾年里
be interested in 對…感興趣
spend …on…花費…做某事
be worried about擔(dān)心
be pleased with滿意…
參考句子：
I was fat and short when I came to the middle school．
句中是when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
Good habits help me  study better and keep healthier
句中g(shù)ood habits名詞復(fù)數(shù)作主語，help sb do sth，and連接兩個動詞短語．

解答 My life has changed a lot in the past three years．I was fat and short when I came to the middle school．（高分句型）At that time，I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it．My parents were worried about me．（三年前的我）
      Now，I like sports and I often play basketball with my classmates after school．So I become taller and stronger than before．I like reading，too．I usually go to the library to read some interesting books．Good habits help me  study better and keep healthier．（高分句型）My parents and my teachers are both pleased with me．（三年后的我）

點評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點和細(xì)節(jié)．