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4．暑假即將來臨，許多學(xué)生喜歡下河游泳．為預(yù)防游泳溺水事故的發(fā)生，你們班將舉行以"珍愛生命，預(yù)防溺水"為主題的班會．請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀銓Π踩�游泳的建議．建議內(nèi)容包括：不要到陌生的河流湖泊游泳；不允許擅自結(jié)伴游泳；不會游泳，不要下水救人…
要求：1．語言通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯．
2．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名．
4．詞數(shù)：70詞左右．
參考詞匯：alone        without permission（未經(jīng)許可）   allow
ask for help   cherish（珍愛）
Going Swimming Safely                                                            

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
If we can't swim，we mustn't get into the water to save a person．
句中"If we can't swim"為if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，這句話意為：如果我們不會游泳，我們不準(zhǔn)下水救人．
高分句型二：
We live only once，so it is important for us to cherish life．
句中"so it is important for us to cherish life．"使用句式為"it is+形容詞+for sb to do sth"．這句話意為：我們只有一次生命，因此對我們來說珍惜生命很重要．

解答 Summer vacation is coming．Many students like going swimming in rivers and lakes．But how to swim safely？Here is my advice．（開篇點題）
Don't swim in strange rivers and lakes．We shouldn't go swimming alone．We can't swim with other students without permission．We are not allowed to swim without a parent．If we can't swim，we mustn't get into the water to save a person．【高分句型一】Sometimes it is dangerous for students to swim．（我的建議）
We live only once，so it is important for us to cherish life．【高分句型二】（升華主題）

點評 動筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．