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14．如今，中學(xué)生的假期生活發(fā)生了很大變化．假定你是李明，美國的筆友Lisa想了解中國學(xué)生現(xiàn)在的假期生活．請寫封回信．要點(diǎn)如下：
●學(xué)習(xí)和休閑仍然重要；
●幫忙做家務(wù)或干農(nóng)活；
●參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)，做志愿者工作，幫助他人．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80一100；
     2．請結(jié)合實(shí)際增加細(xì)節(jié)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
     3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：volunteer 志愿者
Dear Lisa，
I'm glad to have received your letter．Our holiday life has changed a lot．Learning and relaxing are still very important to us．Besides，we often help our parents do housework or farm work．Through that，we realize how hard our parents work every day．And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time．Also，we take an active part in social activities as volunteers．Sometimes，we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children．We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful．We find great pleasure in all these activities．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是假定你是李明，美國的筆友Lisa想了解中國學(xué)生現(xiàn)在的假期生活．請寫封回信．也就是說，寫作時(shí)人稱要用第一人稱I和we，因?yàn)槭墙榻B中國學(xué)生現(xiàn)在的假期生活，所以時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可．
寫作思路及要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)包括（學(xué)習(xí)和休閑仍然重要；幫忙做家務(wù)或干農(nóng)活；參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)，做志愿者工作，幫助他人．）在介紹假期生活時(shí)，要注意不要千篇一律，寫成流水賬，可以借用表示順序的詞（first，then）等，也可用到besides，also等副詞．
重點(diǎn)句型及短語：
take an active part in   積極參加
try one's best to do 盡某人最大努力做某事
We often help our parents do housework or farm work．我們經(jīng)常幫助父母做家務(wù)或農(nóng)活．
Through that，we realize how hard our parents work every day．通過那些，我們可以知道父母每天有多么辛苦．
We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful．我們盡最大努力去幫助那些有需要的人，讓我們的家鄉(xiāng)更美麗．
We take an active part in social activities as volunteers． 我們積極參加志愿者活動(dòng)．

解答 Dear Lisa，
I'm glad to have received your letter．Our holiday life has changed a lot．＜引出假期生活的變化＞Learning and relaxing are still very important to us．＜休閑與學(xué)習(xí)＞Besides，we often help our parents do housework or farm work．Through that，we realize how hard our parents work every day．And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time．＜做家務(wù)和農(nóng)活＞Also，we
take an active part in social activities as volunteers．Sometimes，we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children．We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful．We find great pleasure in all these activities．＜假期生活及感受＞
　　Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming

點(diǎn)評 本文是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文，寫作時(shí)要注意審清主題，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．尤其是本篇作文，使用一些表示順序的詞（first，then）等或besides，also等副詞還可以使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．